The flow of the chapter simply did not work for me. The character interactions seemed forced and the prose suffered because of that. Sometimes the best option is to reassess the angle of the chapter and the immediate conflict within it by rewriting the whole thing from the start. Now if you’ll excuse me, I have some writing to attend to.
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Quickly, quickly... take your seat. Our storyteller is about to begin. Shhhh. Listen... His pipes are fluting emotions of myth and fable, but don't be fooled by fantasia for there are truths hidden within his unworldly tellings. We're drifting now... back in time to a world only he remembers.
